Dawn’s Rosy Fingers–A pair of American Sentences

Dawn’s rosy fingers reaching around to get brown when going up town.

Homer, Odysseus, and mornings you’re too hungover to get up.

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The American sentence consolidates the three lines of a haiku into one single sentence of seventeen syllables.

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