Dawn’s Rosy Fingers–A pair of American Sentences

Dawn’s rosy fingers reaching around to get brown when going up town.

Homer, Odysseus, and mornings you’re too hungover to get up.


The American sentence consolidates the three lines of a haiku into one single sentence of seventeen syllables.

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