Bedtime Paradox

September 22, 2021 ~ The.Richard.Braxton

The showers taken

The teeth brushed clean

The children wild

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Richard Braxton is a writer struggling with his inner poet. He has fought the poetic urge most of his life, but lately, he has fallen prey to this lifestyle. And the world is the worse for it. View all posts by The.Richard.Braxton

8 thoughts on “Bedtime Paradox”

Gerdesilets says:

September 24, 2021 at 3:48 pm

but the night air was mild

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1. The.Richard.Braxton says:
  
  September 24, 2021 at 6:13 pm
  
  And the school clothes were piled.
  
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2. welcomeazt says:
  
  September 24, 2021 at 11:21 pm
  
  A clever three liner.
  
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  1. Gerdesilets says:
    
    September 28, 2021 at 6:03 am
    
    👍
    
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Gerdesilets says:

September 26, 2021 at 12:40 am

sorry i did not had remarked the haiku
three line 5-7-5

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1. The.Richard.Braxton says:
  
  September 26, 2021 at 6:26 am
  
  No problem. It doesn’t have to be a haiku. Structure is only a tool. It’s not a limitation.
  
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  1. Gerdesilets says:
    
    September 28, 2021 at 6:07 am
    
    😁👍
    
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Karima Hoisan says:

September 27, 2021 at 5:45 pm

It made me wide-smile immediately 💐

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