In her synchronous rotation with Earth
Afloat in a pool of slippery blackness
She speaks in phrases of the moon
.
Listeners often misheard short words
That turned the nation’s eyes to the skies
Gave them hope with a simple mission
.
Fascinated by mistakes
What people say
What people hear
.
Hey diddle diddle, familiar to every Britain,
The moon is an idiom again
It got its name having been smuggled at night
.
When we talk
We formulate light
Retrieve words
Memory and move
.
And these errors
They rarely occur
But once every three years
With a month full of two moons
***
I wrote this poem in response to the Wea’ve Written Weekly prompt on Skeptics Kaddish. This week’s prompt poem is “Slavery” by Punam Sharma. If you would like to read the poem or participate in the prompt visit the post here: https://skepticskaddish.com/2022/07/06/w3-prompt-10-weave-written-weekly/
I really love your ending, Richard – well done!
❤
David
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Thank you. I wasn’t sure I was going to make this one work until it all fell together. And that last line came from looking at the definition of a blue moon. I just mixed it a little bit to make it fit the poem. 😀
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well done, Sir
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😀
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Richard, it’s very intriguing how you evoke Armstrong’s misheard word(s) to weave a fascinating verse.
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Thank you. I try to make strange and interesting poetry. They don’t always turn out as good as this one. 😀
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hi, Richard ❤
I just wanna let you know that this week's W3 prompt, hosted by Steven S. Wallace, is now live:
Have a wonderful day,
David
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