Is there nothing to be found
Carved like names into headstones
Forever declaring births and deaths
Of the people who once found faith
On slow walks through this field?
.
Like a tree rooted in death
Looking for peace in the cemetery,
I try to find my bit of happiness
Slowly pushing aside the graves.
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I wrote this poem in response to the Wea’ve Written Weekly prompt on Skeptics Kaddish. This week’s prompt poem is “It’s a Stretch” by Steven S Wallace. If you would like to read the poem or participate in the prompt, visit the post here: https://skepticskaddish.com/2022/08/31/w3-prompt-18-weave-written-weekly/
But more specifically, I wrote this poem after reading Murisopis’ response to the weekly prompt. I was inspired by the poem’s focus on the tree roots grinding through the bodies of the dead trying and failing to get sustenance from them. The poem is well worth a look. You can find it here: https://murisopsis.wordpress.com/2022/09/02/looking-at-a-dead-tree/
Poignant imagery in your second verse of trees looking for life, when trees themselves give life. Fascinating read! I enjoyed it.
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Thank you. With my new job, I haven’t had that much time to write for myself. It is nice to take some time to just be creative. 😀
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Excellent! Happy creating ✍️
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Well written!
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Thank you. 😀
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Thanks Richard for the shout out! I’m thrilled you were inspired. Your second stanza is wonderful, especially the idea of pushing aside death to search for happiness!!
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Thank you. 😀
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Thank you! There’s a lot in this short poem. The metaphor of the roots pushing stones away as if to put the past behind. I really like it!! — SSW
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Thanks for the analyses. I like what you found in the poem. As the writer of the poem, I think I am too close to it to ignore my experience of writing it. 😀
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Wow, Richard ~ that last line was so unexpected for me – I love it!
❤
David
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Hi, Richard ❤
I just wanna let you know that the W3 prompt for this week (hosted by the lovely Britta Benson) is now live:
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