One day, I saw a man eating
Some Rice Crispy Treats with marshmallows.
And then, oh yeah!… Hello. I see you.
.
No. I seen you.
Can you do more?
Stop.
.
All the way. Stop.
I mean stop. Ohhh…
.
He put his hands over his face.
Then, he read the words on the screen.
Oh yeah! Confused. Hello.
What is your name?
.
You haven’t had any snacks for lunch.
And then somebody came and hit me in the noggin.
The end.
Wonderful twist at the end. Lovely writing!
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I will tell my son. He will be pleased to know that you liked it. He is 8 years old and wants to do everything I do. 😀
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Awesome! 😊👍
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Well written!!
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Thank you. I will tell my 8 year old son you liked his writing. I am sure he will get a kick out of knowing. 😀
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That’s great. He is an amazing writer😊
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😀
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Delightful. You are a lucky man.
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I am lucky in so many ways. 😀
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This is so wonderful – hooray to your son, Richard! My daughter is always thrilled when I post a poem we’ve written on my blog 😀
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he loves to tell me what to write. but it is good for him too. He has to practice reading over my shoulder to make sure I am writing the right thing because I will write every word he says. lol 😀
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🤭
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A budding genius! Those last two lines are perfect. Loved it!! 🌟
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😀
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